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Tuesday 24 March 2020

Rainbows End

                       

This week for my online schooling I worked on a really fun place named Rainbows End. This place has a lot of fun and scary rides. When I first went to Rainbows End I went into the kingdom and I had a blast. So this DLO tells you about the location and the reason we have height restrictions and the price of a family pass.
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4 comments:

  1. Robyn Anderson25 March 2020 at 11:47

    Hi Matthew

    Well done for making a start on our home learning challenges. I have left you some feedback on your DLO. Please check these comments. Don't forget Rainbows End is the name of a place and needs a capital letter, as does 'i' on its own. I have changed these for you.

    Mrs A

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  2. Chris25 March 2020 at 12:11

    Hi Matthew,

    You have done an amazing job on your DLO. You have explained why there are height restrictions well. I also really like the drawing you have created, which is really creative.

    Great job Matthew!

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  3. liletina14 April 2020 at 10:40

    Malo Lele Matthew

    Wow $109.98 is a lot of money for your family. I liked how your 25 words summary is about keeping safe and not breaking the rules.
    Maybe you should write a bit more about the minimum Height.

    Which task was the most interesting?

    Keep up the great work Matthew!

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  4. Afatia14 April 2020 at 10:53

    Yassas Matthew

    I really like that you completed the rainbows end activity.109.98 dollars is alot of money to go to rainbows end.I really like you 25 word summary saying we should not break the rules.

    Fabulous work

    ~Afatia

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