Aluminium cans are first starts of with bauxite. Then it gets smelts and turns into ingots then rolled up into a aluminium sheet and a machine cuts holes (Cupping pressing) to make the base of the can.
From the cupping pressing it goes to the body maker. Each can gets forced to high speed into the body maker that makes the base of the can. Then the cans go to the trimmer that cuts the can into its right height. After that the cans go to a special washer that cleans up the left over lubricants then gets forced to move to the oven. Then after the oven the cans go to the printer that colors the cans to make its new notes.
Then once it has finished it always gets tested and then it goes to another factory and then makes the tops of the cans named the press witch stamps the tops and the it makes the lids.
L.I Is to write a 10 sentence explanation. This week I did an writing session. This weeks writing session I learned how to make an explanation and what is it. First I had to make a copy of a google doc. after that I had to make a planner about the explanation and then I had to write the actual explanation.
Good start on your explanation, Matthew. You have written about the main steps in making aluminium cans.
ReplyDeleteWhere are your introduction and conclusion? Remember the introduction tells the reader what they will be reading about. The conclusion gives a summary of what you wrote and links to another topic.