5-7-10 Writing

That was the question that occupied their frightened minds as they crouched, huddling together, next to the pile of dusty sacks on the base of the windmill. This all began on a cloudy day, to where 4 people were on a hike up a mountain. The weather today there was supposed to be a thunderstorm but they didn't believe that as the forecast was always wrong around there area.

So as they were heading up the mountain they saw a big dark grey cloud coming towards them so they decided to go back. As they were heading back it started to rain buckets. They thought to them self's that they wouldn't make it in time so they stumbled into a windmill, and as they were entering a big lightning struck the ground, frightening them and went straight in.

The 4 friends huddled to keep warm and tried to ring someone but no one had service so they rested until the storm stopped. 2 of the friends could as they could constantly hearing the lightning. As they were resting the storm started to settled down an they woke up and took of back home.
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Currently it has been the start of a new term for school and to start of, we worked on writing. We were set a task where we would get a partner and spend 5 minutes to wright as much as you can with the topic that you were given. Then with your partner you would have 7 minutes each to share our work and give feedback on what should change. With 10 you would get 10 minutes to rewrite your story with more detail and use the feedback that your partner gave to you.