10-5-7-10-10 Wiritng

Tonight is the night where all of the stars come out and say hi to the world. A man named James looked forward to this day and wanted to do his plan. His plan was to climb a very high mountain to watch all the stars. But this was no ordinary mountain, this mountain was some sort of cliff. He knew he could do this since he was a professional rock climber. This took him a little while to climb up since it was very big.

The sun was about to set at exactly 6:00, one by one the stars will start to shine up the whole world. He started to climb faster and faster. It was currently 5:00 and he started to stress out. This was his only time to feel the feeling that he wanted to feel when he looked at the stars on a mountain with his Grandma. Time was ticking it got closer and closer to 6:00.

As he was having doubts in himself, he looked up and saw the edge of the cliff so he didn't give up. He went as fast as he could to the top. He could sense relief in himself, and as he got up it was  beautiful. getting there at a time of 5:59. He layed down on his bag looking up thinking about his grandma. As the stars started to appear and cried in joy as the stars wrose above him.
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This week for writing we did 5-7-10 but instead of doing this we added more steps and minutes which is 10-5-7-10-10. This would help us plan and do other stuff. The thing that we really need was time to plan. Out planning time was 10 minutes and the extra 10 minutes at the end is to fix up you writing piece. This was really helpful because we had more time to think about what we are writing and the amount of time we have been given to our writing.