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Title	The epice hunt
Reveal (orientation)	went with mates matthew,xaiver,aungnaing PBS class rooms morinig 9:10 solve clues
Eventxs	got clue solve clue clue was tahi - 1 answer was room 1 we ran to room 1 correct went to next clue clue was go office ran to office correct next clue go to ls2 ran to ls2 correct
Ending	went to mr wong check work correct 1st place had rest write about the hunt

This week we did a scavenger hunt. We had to get into 3 people in each group .My group was Xavier,Aung naing and Matthew. We had to run to each class to find the different clues. We did this in the morning 9:10 on Tuesday September.

We had to solve the clues and try and figure out were to go.Then we had been given a clue the first clue was tahi.We figured out the first clue.We had to go to room 1 so we ran to room 1 as fast as we can .Then we got the clue correct. So then we had got the next clue that was to go to the office.Then we ran to the office and then we got the other correct.So we had the next clue that said to go to ls2.So we ran so slow to ls2 because we were tierd. Then we finally finished then the note said to go back to our teacher to check our work, and Aungnaing said happley "lets go i'm tierd."

So we ran so fast to ls1 to our teacher to check our work. So he told us that we got it all correct and Mr Wong said " Congratulations you guys came first." Then we had a rest and waited on the other groups to come.

By Matthew.T

LI: To edit a recount of an activity.This week we did a writing session.This writing session was all about editing are story's.We had to plan it and follow it or it won't work.we had to look for speech marks,full stops,capital letters and contractions.I liked this writing session because it was challenging and it was very fun at the same time.