Narrative writing

who: man:james,wife:marie,3 kids:Tai,Max,Ela

years: James 30 wife 30 kids 9,10,4

what: fly in the sky and touch the clouds kids wife gets out dad by himself.

were:in a kingdom,sky.

when:tuesday morning 10am.

why:dads dream and mum never let him go.

how:with a machine that floats kingdoms and houses

                                                   story                                         

Once there was a man named James who was 30 years old. He lived in a rich kingdom with his wife  Marie and 3 kids Tai,Max and Ela. James really wanted to fly and touch the sky and clouds. so he made a machine to float his kingdom all the up to the clouds.

On Tuesday morning 10am he tested it on different objects that does not . Finally he worked it on his own kingdom but a loud earthquake happened.then when the kids and the wife heard it they quickly ran out of the kingdom and went on the flat and smooth grass. the wife was think what was missing and she remembered her husband so she tried to go inside the kingdom but it was too late.the ground  crumbled and the kingdom began to float in the sky. She cried and cried.Then James was calling out to his wife and his kids.After he went outside and saw them underneath him then he got scared.he was scared by himself so he prayed to himself that he could go down.James wife was thinking and trying to get her kingdom down.but she tried her best and never got it down so she prayed that it will come down so everything will come back to normal.

But suddenly James felt a little nudge and then the kingdom went down as james wife was crying.Then James wife stop crying and saw it coming down to the ground. James and his wife and kids ran and hugged each other and they will never leave each other's site ever again.

L.I is to write a narrative with an image what I learnt was by trying to describe a image and telling about what is happening. how I learnt was by using topes and knowing what it was and that helped me with my narratives.