Persuasive Speeches

L.I: To write a speech that persuades others to think the way you do. I have really improved my speech writing over the past 2 years, this year was my best speech because i had a lot of persuasive sentences which could get the audience to think like i do, but i did have some mistakes which were fixing up some missing full stops and rearranging things. I got one of the best feed backs which was adding caffeine affects the central nervous system.
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Hi my name is Matthew and I believe that coke is really bad for children under the age of 10 years old and I want parents and kids to realise this, So let me tell you why.

Coke has caffeine in it which children should NOT have. If they do, their brain will start playing up. In this case they will start to get headaches and anxiety because caffeine affects the central nervous system.

 Did you know that one can of coke has 10 teaspoons of sugar! and if you drink 3 cans of coke a day you will be having 30 teaspoons of sugar just from your drinks? Sugar could rot your teeth and could give you diabetes which can lead to being blind, losing limbs and losing teeth.

Think about the costs you will occur to keep yourself healthy. Did you know that 65% of New Zealanders have developed bad teeth just because of coke?Think about how much this is costing for our country’s health care. If I could put in one law into place I would put in that children under the age of 10 years old can not drink coke.

 If you are thinking right now oh if where not allowed to drink coke than we can drink no sugar coke. Well you can drink no sugar but it could still affect your central nervous system as it still has caffeine in it. There for people can live a healthy life.