The scary tortise

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Title	The scary Tortoise
Orientation	Once there was 2 kids. a boy named Jeff and a girl Taylor. They both lived together with their family. Jeff had a surprise for Taylor. So after Jeff was waiting for Taylor. So she can get dressed they went to look at the surprise.Jeff took Taylor to a forest . Then Taylor saw a picnic for her.
Problem	But suddenly they saw a Tortoise. Taylor freaked out and said "is this for me!" shouted Taylor. Then Jeff said "yes this is yours" said Jeff.Then she named it Nay. But suddenly it was hungry. Then it chased them.Then They ceped on running until the tortas got tired.But the Tortoise was trying his best to catch up to them but they were too fast.Then suddenly the Tortoise had an idea ding! then the Tortoise did his plan it was to fake sleep.Then Jeff went up to him but Taylor shouted "stoooop!! don't go up to him it might just be a chrap" but Jeff said "no it won't i will just poke him with a stick".Then jeff poked him the stick then he woke up and jeff ran away. Then the Tortoise screamed "aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"
Events	Then they ran "let's go hurry up Jeff" shouted Taylor.Then Jeff ran as fast as he can "move thoses littel legs you got" shouted Taylor. Then they went all the way back were they first started the surpirise.Then jeff keeped looking for something to help them he keeps on looking until he finds something that can help them be safe in the forest.
Solution	But then Jeff suddenly found his phone. Then he called the animal care to look after him.Then the animal care came and looked after him and put him in the famous zoo so everybody can see him .Then Taylor and Jeff came to the same zoo. To see Nay the Tortoise so they can see him for a reminder for when they first met.

\ L.I Is to learn and know topes. What I learnt was that how to use topes and when to use it.my topes sheet is to help you with your storys. How I learnt was by using a google docs and putting my story on the topes sheet.