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Thursday 29 June 2017

The Haunted House

Once there was a man named James he had a wife and 2 kids.they lived in a lovely beach house.Today it was halloween so they went out and celebrated halloween.after they got candy of every house they saw they saw one last house it was a spooky halloween house.James had a bad feeling about this  but the kids really wanted to go.

Then they when they knocked on the door but no one was swearing then the door suddenly opened then they went inside to have a look then the door shut.James tried to open it but it was locked.So they when to look around they heard a squeaky noise then they ran.They were so scared so they creeped up to the noise then they saw a ghost.Then they stopped and James found a hiding spot so they when in.After they went in they and found a touch they used it and they saw a freaky clown Jane screamed" rrruuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" so they ran James wife said "that was very scary".then they heard the squeaky noise again then they discovered that it was just a mouse.

But James found something it was in his pocket it was his phone then James had an idea he said "why can't we just call the firefighters the will get us out" suggested James so the called.After they called the fire man opened the and let them free James shouted "i'm free finally i'm free".the firefighters said "don't ever knock on that door no one has survived in that kind of seturewasten but luckily you are the only one who survived"said the fire fighters.So James and his wife went back home and they ate their candy for good luck.
L.I is to right a narrtive in 45 minutes. What I learnt is how to write a narrative and the diffrent parts of it. How I learnt was by using a google docs and writing topes.

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