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Friday 16 June 2017

Baby bear

                                                                                   baby bear
Baby bear was tired and woke up in his house because mama bear was growling so she can go fishing.with baby bear. baby bear was so excited because baby bear never went fishing. then baby bear rushed to the kitchen and made breakfast.baby bear was so excited to go fishing. after they ate their breakfast they went fishing.When they went fishing baby bear said to mama bear "mama look at the big cliff"said baby bear "yes it is a big cliff" said mama bear. then when mama bear was not  looking  baby bear sneaked of to climb the icy mountain then he found stairs to go up then when baby bear got up it was really slippery then when he was going to go down the stairs once he got up he fought the cold and breezy wind it was chilly as a block  of ice then suddenly a big snow ball came out of nowhere and punched baby bear and pushed him off and flew in the air.Mama bear sees baby bear in the air,as she is getting fish.Baby bear fell in the water,while mama was trying to grab him.Mama bear gripped baby bears hand as baby bear was drowning.Mama bear pulled baby bear as she was tired.Then mama bear was hugging him and giving him kisses so he feels ok but mama bear thought to herself that this weal never work and tried something outlets so she grabbed some cold water the water was freezing like a cold metal pole and put cold water on his face so he can wake up and then he woke up then mama bear hugged him and baby bear said " what are we doing her mama" mama bear said nothing and went back home.





LI: To write a narrative sequence of events.
what I learnt was that how to use opes and learn about the parts of it.
 how I learnt was by using story  organiser. I was trying to understand how to use it and when to use it in different places.

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